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Smart phones have proved to be far more advanced than traditional cell phones of today. Taking this into consideration,it does not mean that smart phones are better in every way. There are both advantages and disadvantages for both of these devices.
Firt the smart phones are like a computer.It means they are a platform and the user can install any program they want.For example,if the user has a smartphone,but it doesn’t have a weather appliation that the user like, he can download the appliation from Internet and install it to the device.On the other hand traditionalphone do not have this capability.
Second,the smart phone has a system like IOS, Android, and Windows. On the one hand the phone has much expandibility,but on the other hand,there is a risk of people hacking it. One of the biggest risk of smart phones is that it can catch a virus.There are viruses focused on the smart phone specifically.They can send private information, send a message,make a call to the expensive number. Viruses like these can add significant charges to a persons smart phone.
Another disadvantage of smart phones is that they are more expensive.The smart phone is very complicated and involves such components like the CPU, RAM,and ROM.These kinds of hardware are not cheap,so smart phones are expensive than cellphones.
In contrast many users only like cellphones because they are cheap, fast, and has a longer lasting battery.
One misfortune of cellphones is that it can’t install program like smart phone. There are only some simple functions like text, call, and an alarm clock.The user cant change the seeting in the phone,because all the settings are already done.
The biggest advantage of cellphones is the operation speed. Cellphones can opearte very fast because all the programsare in the hardware and has no smart system so it never break down.So many people use cellphones because they can’t stand how slowsmart phones are.
Finally,the cellphone is smaller than smartphones,because they dont have CPU, RAM..etc.Therefor the battery last longer because cellphones do not use any of these technologies so the battery last longer.For example,a smart phone can use one day but a cellphone can use 5 days.Some users usually have a cellphone because they dont want to miss an important call.
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At the end of your first paragraph…don’t repeat the word ‘both’, just write “There are advantages and disadvantages to both these devices”
1st word of your second paragraph – you need to insert an ’s’ into first! 2nd and 3rd sentence of this paragraph ,insert a ‘c’ into application, add an ’s’ to read “user likes” and another ’s’ and a space so that the end reads “traditional phones”
3rd paragraph….add ’s’ so that is reads “biggest risks”
4th paragraph…it should read “smart phones are more expensive”
5th…”cheap, fast and have a…”
6th…programs….also, put an apostrophe into can’t and correct the type for setting (you have seeting!)
7th…second sentence spell ‘operate’ correctly, put a space in between ‘programs’ and ‘are’…add an ’s’ so that it reads “never breaks down”. Put a space in between ’slow’ and ’smart’
Last paragraph…add an ‘e’ to therefore, add an ’s’ to battery lasts longer…add an ‘a’ so the sentence reads “a smart phone can use one a day, but a cellphone can last 5 days”.
Go over the whole piece and check you have one space after each comma and two spaces after each full-stop. It does makes it better to read with the correct spacing. Take a bit more time before you post and read it to yourself – you will then see when it doesn’t read very well. You shouldn’t rush and just bang any rubbish out; those few extra minutes of checking will improve your essays and your grades. I’m not going to do your homework for you, but would advise you make a better conclusion – stick to the point about the differences between your two products and maybe offer an opinion as to why they are both good or why one is better than the other. Good luck